Here is a complete analysis of Thomas Hardy’s poem Under The Waterfall which retells the romantic event of a picnic by a waterfall. The poem will be retold by myself bringing out the key features and analytically comments from it. At the end of the article, there is the historical context to this poem. Feel free to skip to the parts most relevant to you.
When reading this analysis, please remember much of this is an interpretation from me. As long as it is backed with evidence from the poem, it is a valid point.
What is the Poem about?
Breakdown Analysis of Under The Waterfall
Whenever I plunge my arm, like this,
In a basin of water, I never miss
The sweet sharp sense of a fugitive day.
Already, we can gather the poem is being told by a woman in hindsight of a moment in time. From this, it brings to light straight away that she is talking about something from the past that cannot be regained or repeated. In essence, the ‘fugitive’ day has escaped.
Hardy also uses an oxymoron here with ‘sweet sharp‘ to describe the day making clear that it was a nice delicate memory but is also a spiteful memory. The word ‘fugitive‘ means criminal which suggests that this memory of lovers was possibly against the law or was an affair where the couple was rebellious. This supports the reason why one of the couple remembers the memory vividly: from remembering the memory enables them to relive the emotions and excitement of being rebellious. However, the point is brought forward that we cannot live in the past like the start of this poem does.
Fetched back from its thickening shroud of gray.
Grey, in this context, is a symbolism for death. This is because a ‘shroud‘ is a lengthening piece of cloth which a dead person is wrapped in before a burial. The fact that this ‘shroud of gray‘ is thickening makes clear that the memory is disappearing/becoming forgotten which will result in permanent loss like the cycle of life and death is. It could also mean that this memory has not been thought about for a long time too representing the lack of romance.
Hence the only prime
And real love-rhyme
That I know by heart
And that leaves no smart
This part of the poem has a fluent and natural flow to it due to the rhyming being in pairs that progress as A A / B B. This makes it feel fluent which is all used to represent the flow of the waterfall from the memory. Note the lack of use of sharp sounding letters – the ‘s‘ on ‘leaves‘ and ‘smart‘ adds to the symbolised motion of the waterfall from the way is continues the soft and flowing sound of this extract.
Is a purl of a little valley fall
About three spans wide and two spans tall
Over a table of solid rock,
And into a scoop of the self-same block;
In these four stanzas, there is a slight theme of sublime here from the way that human affairs (such as the one between the woman and man) have such little impact to the environment of mother nature’s landscape. The use of ‘purl‘ makes the scenery of the waterfall feel like it is a treasure to see. More than anything though, human’s affairs come and go with time. The scenery does not. The scenery lives through time unlike humans do.
The purl of a runlet that never ceases
In stir of kingdoms, in wars, in peaces;
With a hollow boiling voice it speaks
And has spoken since hills were turfless peaks’.
The use of ‘kingdom‘ provides an archaic form to this poem at this moment. We associate kingdoms and castles with the middle ages where there were ‘wars, in peaces‘. Again, Hardy uses ‘purl‘ again to add similarities between the runlet (small stream) and valley. However, this can bring up a different interpretation that he uses purl again as a form of juxtaposition: the power of a valley is far greater than that of a stream.
This concludes the end of the first stanza. From this stanza, the following themes are arose:
‘And why gives this only prime
Idea to you of a real love-rhyme?
And why does plunging your arm in a bowl
Full of spring water, bring throbs to your soul?’
From the start of the second stanza, is clear that the second voice (being the man) is now talking from the use of speech marks. The man is questioning the woman. He is asking her why she is getting strong emotions from just plunging her arm into a bowl of water. From my point of view, this contrasts against the above stanza which was very dreamy. This stanza starts sharply back into reality with the man asking exactly why she is being dreamy.
A great point which I think reappears throughout the poem is the words used by Hardy associated with falling such as ‘plunged‘ and ‘slipped‘. As well as representing the water falling down the waterfall, it could also represent the ups and downs of the lover’s relationship.
‘Well, under the fall, in a crease of the stone,
Though where precisely none ever has known,
Jammed darkly, nothing to show how prized,
And by now with its smoothness opalized,
The woman answers the questions at lines 17-20. She found an object under the waterfall of much beauty. We can gather its precious and beautiful from the words that describe it such as ‘prized‘, ‘smoothness opalized‘. The word ‘opalized‘ makes clear that the object is showing varying colours (like an opal does). An opal is a gem stone. Therefore, whatever she is describing is very naturally beautiful and divine.
Is a drinking glass:
For, down that pass
My lover and I
Walked under a sky
This passage of the poem replicates the structure at lines 5-8. Just like at lines 5-8, there is the used of the ‘s’ (glass, pass and sky) to make this section flow much like the waterfall. The voice describes their partner as ‘my lover‘. Therefore, we can deem the couple to be very affectionate for each other.
Of blue with a leaf-wove awning of green,
In the burn of August, to paint the scene,
And we placed our basket of fruit and wine
By the runlet’s rim, where we sat to dine
The woman is expanding on her memory going into more detail. The shock of a question to the poem slowly resorts its way back to being dreamy again from the woman answering with a detailed explanation of their memory. We can gather the memory was by the edge of a stream where the lovers sat down to fruit and wine in a basket to have a picnic. There is alot of imagery used in this poem to help encapsulate the reader into the thought process of the first voice so that the reader relives the beautiful memory like the voice is. The vivid colours creates a scenery of perfection: the sky is blue, the grass is green and the weather is hot, ‘In the burn of August’. From describing this memory in such detail makes apparent to the reader that this is not just any memory – it must be a special memory for the first voice to remember it in such detail even though it was ‘Fetched back from its thickening shroud of gray’.
And when we had drunk from the glass together,
Arched by the oak-copse from the weather,
I held the vessel to rinse in the fall,
Where it slipped, and sank, and was past recall
The woman is now describing how they both drank from the same wine bottle (with the bottle representing their love for each other) and she went to rinse the bottle but it slipped and fell into the stream. Again, ‘sank‘ is another word associated with falling.
Though we stooped and plumbed the little abyss
With long bared arms. There the glass still is.
And, as said, if I thrust my arm below
Cold water in basin or bowl, a throe
Here, the lovers are attempting to recover the glass by plunging their arms into the water to retrieve the bottle. This is most likely why the first voice recalls the memory ‘Whenever I plunge my arm, like this / In a basin of water‘. Thomas Hardy uses imagery lovely imagery here ‘stooped and plumbed‘ and ‘little abyss’. With an abyss being a seemingly bottomless chasm, it is clear by describing it as ‘little‘ contrasts against the true meaning of what an abyss is. The actions of the lovers being ‘stooped and plumbed‘ help make the poem flow. They are not aggressive words – instead, they are being delicate when trying to retrieve the bottle. The fact that the bottle has fallen could represent how the love of the couple has deteriorated: the bottle will stay there forever contrasting against the lover’s love which will not.
From the past awakens a sense of that time,
And the glass we used, and the cascade’s rhyme.
The basin seems the pool, and its edge
The hard smooth face of the brook-side ledge
This is the part of the poem which answers why she ‘awakens a sense of that time‘ from dipping her arm into water. The bottle she had dropped into the stream had obviously not been retrieved by the lovers. Therefore, that is why she was able to see the bottle ‘under the fall, in a crease of the stone‘. The word ‘cascade‘ is a small waterfall. Hardy gives the waterfall a poetic feature such that the waterfall is rhyming when the water cascades down, ‘cascade’s rhyme‘.
And the leafy pattern of china-ware
The hanging pants that were bathing there
The attention to detail from the first voice makes clear how beautiful a memory it was to her because she has not forgotten any of the detail. The reader is also able to know now that the memory was a very distant memory because there are now plants growing around the bottle. This links in with the question, ‘Can we live in the past with memories?‘ It is clear the woman is doing exactly this: if it was a memory that only just happened, then it is clear that one of the reasons they are recalling it is because it is still fresh in their memory. However, the fact its distant makes clear she is living in the past. This begs the question why? Is the relationship with the lover not as good as what is use to be? Is the relationship going downhill like Hardy hints at with the constant use of words associated with falling? This poem’s message can be based much on interpretation.
‘By night, by day, when it shines or lours…
…And its presence adds to the rhyme of love…
…In turns therefrom sipped lover’ wine.’
We finish the poem with a final stanza in short form above. This stanza does not follow the structure of the poem of having moderately long stanzas with four short indented lines in the middle representing the flow of a waterfall (and also looking like one too visually). Instead, it is a six line stanza with the first voice still speaking. Just to confirm, the women is the one speaking, ‘No lip has touched it since his and mine‘, bringing a sense of virginity to the bottle that the last time it has been in contact properly was with the two lovers while having their picnic. She describes the bottle as a ‘chalice‘ giving the bottle a sense of religious important. This makes the reader feel that there was more to the couple’s love than we first thought – their love was spiritually angelic. The waterfall is personified here:
And its presence adds to the rhyme of love
Persistently sung by the fall above
As long as the waterfall keeps having water fall down it, the lover’s love will continue. Hardy makes a link between nature and love using the waterfall as a symbol for the couple’s love. This gives the waterfall great importance because it can be deemed one of the main features of the woman’s memory.